Haiku

  WIND-BLOWN, RAINED ON…
  BENT BARLEY-GRASS YOU MAKE ME
  NARROW PATH INDEED





1) Torn, alone, tattered, mistreated, unloved, water, puddles, gutters, leaves, strong wind, mud, single, erosion, rocks, dirt, tears
2) Beaten, lonesome, complete, force, create, barely, plants, wheat stock, flower, crop circles, grow, broken
3) Leading, confined, path, planned, winding, balance beam, hiking trail, gravel, dirt, sand, stepping stones, fence, pressure, narrow lines

Line #1: erosion torn, tears
Line #2: wheat, grow, broken
Line #3: path, fence, narrow lines


I think I have a good idea about the imagery, but I know I have a lot of refining to do. I feel I am a bit shaky on my overall concept so far. I will be doing more than 27, just to demonstrate better, clearer ideas.